Reflection: I didn't get a lot of feedback on my first elevator pitch post. The one response I did get was positive and actually came from a completely different perspective. It showed my a whole other avenue on how my business idea could be successful. There's nothing I would change based on this feedback.
Although you did not get any feedback on your first video, I thought you did a great job speaking clearly and efficiently. You brought enthusiasm and knowledge that would definitely resonate with the audience. My only advice would be to dress professionally; however I know that may be a problem with the current quarantine. All in all, great job, cant wait to see the product.
Hey Savanna, I think you did a great job in this assignment. Your idea was portrayed with enthusiasm and clarity which was easy to follow along to. My only recommendation would be to dress professionally and be in a consistent setting, as the environment gets a little distracting. Besides that, I think you did a great job with this pitch and it genuinely got me excited about your product!
Hi Savannah, great job on your pitch! I think it was cool that you walked your dog while speaking on the business idea. I can see that you're passionate about this idea and think that it could help others. However, next time you may want to do the pitch at a single location instead of walking around. Overall, great job.
Hey Savannah, As I mentioned on previous posts, I really love your idea. You speak on it with confidence, and I believe that really helps the viewer/potential customer to believe in your product too. The only thing I would change is the location. It gets somewhat distracting and hard to focus on your words while you're walking around.
Although you did not get any feedback on your first video, I thought you did a great job speaking clearly and efficiently. You brought enthusiasm and knowledge that would definitely resonate with the audience. My only advice would be to dress professionally; however I know that may be a problem with the current quarantine. All in all, great job, cant wait to see the product.
ReplyDeleteHey Savanna,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in this assignment. Your idea was portrayed with enthusiasm and clarity which was easy to follow along to. My only recommendation would be to dress professionally and be in a consistent setting, as the environment gets a little distracting. Besides that, I think you did a great job with this pitch and it genuinely got me excited about your product!
Hi Savannah, great job on your pitch! I think it was cool that you walked your dog while speaking on the business idea. I can see that you're passionate about this idea and think that it could help others. However, next time you may want to do the pitch at a single location instead of walking around. Overall, great job.
ReplyDeleteHey Savannah,
ReplyDeleteAs I mentioned on previous posts, I really love your idea. You speak on it with confidence, and I believe that really helps the viewer/potential customer to believe in your product too. The only thing I would change is the location. It gets somewhat distracting and hard to focus on your words while you're walking around.