2. All the feedback I received was pretty much the same. Choose a consistent location. However, inside my house during the current COVID-19 circumstances is less than ideal. There's too many people and constant interruptions. Outside is my only option at this time, but in different times I would agree with this feedback.
3. I had limited options to changing the location of my pitch. No place is really ideal at this time. I chose to still walk my dog because although it may be a little distracting it gives the reader a visualization and understanding of how hectic and stressful a walk can be with or without other dogs present which stresses the importance for my business idea.
Hey Sav, although we are not facing the best conditions when it comes to giving a presentation like an elevator pitch, I believe you still did a great job. Your body language gave off the right impression and I got the sense that you are enthusiastic about your idea. I like the fact that you chose a constant location for all of your pitches making it constant.
ReplyDeleteI think it would be beneficial to be able to share in your pitch how the app will be able to detect the approaching dogs before the dogs detect them on their own. Dogs have keen senses of smell, hearing, and sight, allowing them to know their are other approaching dogs before we would even know. So it would make sense to communicate to the buyers how your app is more effective than the dog's senses. Great presence in your pitch and you are a strong communicator.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your pitch! Times are tough so I understand the struggle of finding a nice, quiet place to do an elevator pitch. I can see you have really improved since the first pitch; you are more confident while speaking and give the audience the impression of being knowledgeable.
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ReplyDeleteHey Savanna,
I think we can all relate to the Covid-19 related issues. An indoor location rather than an outdoor walk would be less distracting and easier for the viewer to absorb all the information, but I have to agree that theres pros and cons to each. I think you're right when you say that it really puts the viewer into the real reality of what your app offers. and at the end of the day, its about the content, and as usual, your content and delivery is great!